Here is at last chapter 24.
My writers block hasn't dissapeared and I hope I can revive it again. For me the vacation is over and now that my school is finished I need to go for my job. I am away this weekend so I will respond sunday evening.



Anyway on to the story: I made this to give you a deeper insight into Ember's mother. Maybe she isn't all bad like she sometimes appears. Maybe she does care about Ember, after all Ember is her daughter. I also wanted to rev up the level of battling. More strategies and more advanced battling will come up.

Ember seems invinciable with her thermal coat but is this really true? Is Ember truly unbeatable or does she have her weaknesses and therefore can be defeated.

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