Special Collab Sketch Page Commission for  Burned_Out, thank you!

This is the fourth page of the five orders purchased by Burn, to feature biographies and slices of the life of his Sergal family. All the five orders are fully based on the super-rich, juicy, exciting, and interesting details of significant members of the Sergal family fully written by the commissioner, in order to create pages out of both the character information and Vilous lore.

As I said before, the concept of this artwork is based off of my brother and one of the Vilous official Lore Masters  Coju’s initial idea and sketch. Thusly, this piece is a virtual collaborative effort between me and him!

Thanks to him, I have achieved bringing an artwork with full-scaled character lore that even has a storyline alongside both the original concepts provided by the character owner and canon-compliant design for the official Vilous lore!

📖What the Artwork Tells📖

There are Kipiri and Bengir, children of Nubinara and Baal!

Kipiri, a girl with yellow fur, is like her mother in that she is bold and adventurous, and like her father in that she is very physical and loves being outside more than anything, preferring to explore the estate grounds, train with her father, exercise, etc.

Bengir, a boy with purple fur, on the other hand, is very timid and has great problems with anxiety, preferring to be home inside where it is safe and clean. However, while Kipiri is easily bored from tasks like homework / studying, Bengir excels in intellectual things, possessing a phenomenal memory and a prodigious skill in drawing things, these abilities are generally rare as a Sergal species due to various features of the racial nature.


And this page is featuring them, the moments including their younger times than the current ages displayed on the original reference provided by the commissioner!

The upper left shot is about their 3~4 years old, Bengir was reading in a picture book while Kipiri was running around with a toy spear!

The upper-middle shot displays Bengir at about 4 years old, he was enjoying a hand puzzle with his mother!

The upper right shot displays Kipiri at about 5 years old, she was enjoying being lifted up high by her father!

The bottom left shot is about Kipiri at the same age as the ref, she was training martial arts with her father!

The bottom middle shot is about Kipiri and Bengir were doing their homework, but Kipiri was abandoning and lazing to do her ones while Bengir was working on his ones seriously!

The bottom right shot is about Baal was telling very corny "Dad" jokes based on a horror story, and Kipiri was scared and fearful of hearing it while Bengir was amazed and bored because he was realizing it was just silly all along! X)

🌟 Vilous Lore-Supportive TIPS 🌟

-Why is the paper so blue or purple

Because of the difference of material. As many wooden materials on Planet Tal do, the paper also relies on Talyxian woods as main resources. It brings more or less alien and exotic hues rather than pure white paper unlike what you can find here.

As general technologies on Planet Tal are, papermaking technology is also a bit primitive and simple when compared to those of Earth. Due to this, the quality of the paper is somewhat rough, has a scabrous and unsmooth texture.

-Green Plants are "RARE" and "PRECIOUS" in the Vilous Universe!

I know I've mentioned this point many times so far, however, still just as being some important tips for people who are new to the Vilous Universe.

Planet Tal is populated by wondrous creatures and strange, exotic, alien flora called Talyxians, they fulfill "normal" sceneries of the natural environment with strange plants which do not have chlorophyll, these are not commonly green, but rather exhibit hues in the purple, red, pink, orange, blue, or monochromatic scale.

However, plants that fall under the Eltus organism group make different sights from these Talyxian plants. Eltus plants have similar biology to common plants on Earth, featuring the presence of chlorophyll and display an appearance that is similar to that of common plants on Earth. Due to this, they are also known as and called "green plants" among Eltus folks. As they are a fairly rare sight, they are recognized as highly valuable, desirable, precious items among Eltus folks. For now, only two places are confirmed as the main habitation of Eltus plants: The protected Eltus plantations within the Gold Ring nation and the Eltus biomes sanctuary on summit areas of the Lyvank Mountains. Cultivated and potted Eltus plants can be seen in various places in cities in Gold Ring.


Again but as what should not be forgotten, special thanks to Coju for the achievement of this, I could never achieve this without his help in both concept sketching and lore-supportive tips!

Now there is a page for Burn's Sergal family left, but, I'd like to space the uploads some, to avoid "shotgun spam" of submissions.

We hope you enjoy the pages~! Thank you for your support and patronage!


Art by me and  Coju
Character belongs to  Burned_Out
English Translation and Lore Correction Help by  Coju

The fictional species belong to the world of Vilous created by  Mick39 and  Kiki-UMA