Special Collab Sketch Page Commission for  Burned_Out, thank you!

This is the second page of the five orders purchased by Burn, to feature biographies and slices of the life of his Sergal family. All the five orders are fully based on the super-rich, juicy, exciting, and interesting details of significant members of the Sergal family fully written by the commissioner, in order to create pages out of both the character information and Vilous lore.

As I said before, the concept of this artwork is based off of my brother and one of the Vilous official Lore Masters  Coju’s initial idea and sketch. Thusly, this piece is a virtual collaborative effort between me and him!

Thanks to him, I have achieved bringing an artwork with full-scaled character lore that even has a storyline alongside both the original concepts provided by the character owner and canon-compliant design for the official Vilous lore!

📖What the Artwork Tells📖

This page also is featuring Baal the Eastern Sergal and his young time, but this is about when he left the Reono lands to explore Gold Ring!

The upper right shot is about when he was traveling across the white desert called Sailzane, from the east to the south, and was seeing the Gold Ring that is up ahead, from a carriage!

The bottom right shot is about when he had just arrived in a city of the Gold Ring, he was looking at the scenery of the city with fascination! As there are various things that are new to see for him, for example, the Nevrean race, which rarely exists in Reono regions! A boy is naughtily running around while a woman is saying like "Be careful!" or something like that! X)

And the left shot, it's about after he found a job working as a private guard for a Bloodstone and his daughter, and this is a moment that he was befriending the daughter and they had realized that they fall in love with each other!

Also for the left shot, I prepared a Bloodstone royal garden that is lush with rich Eltus plants with a few of Talyxian plants that sneakily lurked but are perfectly harmless to Eltus, giving off a peaceful and harmonious illusion between the two. As some of the core concepts of the Bloodstones are inspired by the general idea of Emperor of Japan more or less, so I got a visual inspiration from Imperial Palace in Japan.

🌟 Vilous Lore-Supportive TIPS 🌟

-Why Nevreans are rare in Reono

Because due to language differences and the massive distance between their homeland Nevrea region and Reono, they had not existed at all in Eastern lands until it had reached the later stages of years of the Rain Calendar. After the end of the major immigration of Nevreans from the Nevrea region to Gold Ring, eventually, some Nevreans settled in Gold Ring would travel from Gold Ring to Reono for each reason and purpose. Still, Nevreans would be still minor residents in Reono due to the distance and differences of social environments.

-Green Plants are "RARE" and "PRECIOUS" in the Vilous Universe!

I know I've mentioned this point many times so far, however, still just as being some important tips for people who are new to the Vilous Universe.

Planet Tal is populated by wondrous creatures and strange, exotic, alien flora called Talyxians, they fulfill "normal" sceneries of the natural environment with strange plants which do not have chlorophyll, these are not commonly green, but rather exhibit hues in the purple, red, pink, orange, blue, or monochromatic scale.

However, plants that fall under the Eltus organism group make different sights from these Talyxian plants. Eltus plants have similar biology to common plants on Earth, featuring the presence of chlorophyll and display an appearance that is similar to that of common plants on Earth. Due to this, they are also known as and called "green plants" among Eltus folks. As they are a fairly rare sight, they are recognized as highly valuable, desirable, precious items among Eltus folks. For now, only two places are confirmed as the main habitation of Eltus plants: The protected Eltus plantations within the Gold Ring nation and the Eltus biomes sanctuary on summit areas of the Lyvank Mountains. Cultivated and potted Eltus plants can be seen in various places in cities in Gold Ring.


Again but as what should not be forgotten, special thanks to Coju for the achievement of this, I could never achieve this without his help in both concept sketching and lore-supportive tips!

Now there are still 3 pages for Burn's Sergal family remaining, but, I'd like to space the uploads some, to avoid "shotgun spam" of submissions.

We hope you enjoy the pages~! Thank you for your support and patronage!


Art by me and  Coju
Character belongs to  Burned_Out
English Translation and Lore Correction Help by  Coju

The fictional species belong to the world of Vilous created by  Mick39 and  Kiki-UMA