honestly i do like that second design

yay c: building with sticks is hard

I am not paying you yet, so waiting is okay.

makes sense!

talk about critical x3c

right!?

Ka is kinda mean in this one, though I don't think she intends to be.

good observation

the first is prob the saffest bet go simple great comic

no mean wolf would blow it down

Hmm... Is Ka, like, prideful or something?

well she's definitely not a role model haha

Pride cometh before the fall.

Also this has not been the first that she wasn't a role model. There was also that time when she was pretty rough with that penguin, granted that guy was a lying prick.

Aaaaw, that innocent face in the second panel /)^3^(\

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Dashing the hope in thier big innocent eyes with blunt realism. Well most of thier eyes, I was wondering why Moi was in the lineup haha.

Oh, he and Ka are a team

Sorry, I just meant to point out how well the first panel sets up the rest of the page. Ka being critical but still yet to present and Moi being Moi.

Honestly, I am rooting for that second design. Ka's becoming too power hungry and ambitious for my liking.

Ah I've been where Ka is before, having an Idea that you're so sure about that you end up putting down other people's ideas without considering what benefits they might have over your's.
This is a cute show and tell meeting! The first one's little grape posean is adorable. I like how Moi and Ka are basically an inseparable team at this point, I wonder how long its gonna take for Ka to end up with a passenger like the other poseans?

haha it took me very long to get what a passenger meant

Hi, i Been following your work for the last weeks, and i have only one thing to Say... I love it ;D

Hi :·) thanks!

If they can build the pyramids or Stonehenge, they can build Vermily's rock fort!

that's the spirit!

Well uh, to be honest, kinda being a douche with those designs. You're right of course! But no need to just flame them ;-;

Reading this page, I was kinda reminded of Monty Python's Architects Sketch. (Seriously, if you've never seen it, it's a classic.)
But Ka certainly does seem focused on the problems with these designs, rather than the possibility of fixing them.

ahah nice, I had never seen that one

i ADORE ka's constant, childlike "hey that's great but did you consider my idea is cooler?" that she's been doing since day one

ooh lol, I just finished re reading it and that's very true :·B

Is there some other site that lore between pages is getting uploaded?
Cause it feels like every page contains only a fifth of what's happening between the pages surrounding it. Like the entire cuddle party was 4 panels, the two before that was before they even got in the party pile, so a new concept was introduced and resolved in 2/3rds of a page.
The last three pages literally just went Day, Night and Day again.
I'm legitimately struggling to tell how long they've been in this forest...?

This isn't me taking a dig on this comic, I really like how it looks but the pacing really feels like you didn't want to make this bit and your just trying to skip to the good part.

There's currently no other place with lore although I've been considering doing mini written stories like that to explore more content! and yeah, I can see how it's very fast paced (perhaps too much, but certainly less than I originally planned, my original plan was dizzyingly fast :s), I just feel like if I'm going to make people wait a week+ and me draw for many hours it has to be something plot worthy rather than "they cuddled and then they cuddled some more and then slept and then woke up".
I liked it how in the Rome series by HBO they could build up to a big battle and you see the armies about to charge at each other and then after a couple of symbolic shots like a banner falling they skip directly to the end result of the battle which is technically all one needs to know to follow the story.
I will continue working on the pacing to try and make it feel more smooth and with time to breathe though. Regarding time, the pregnancies and seasons are good time markers, no babies have been born yet and Ka said they should finish the hall before the first autumn or winter (a more precise time stamp is coming soon)

Is that a rattata I spot in the first panel?

oh no, ka is turning into an asshole!

Sometimes is hard to feel good when Ka is pointing out everything, i dont know how others feel when Ka says they are stupid. Maybe soon or latter she will be equally frank but less insulting/destructive with words?