So,about pages 5 to 9...


Page 5

Panel 1-Demi is about to go down stairs.

Panel 2- She bumps into Jack.

Panel 3- Demi rubs her head. "Geez,what gives."

Panel 4-Jack is holding a bucket and scrubber. "You gonna need these."

Panel 5- "I already cleaned your rooms!" She whines.

Panel 6- "I know. But, you still have stuff to do."

Panel 7- "All this all over being late for rent!? This is wolf abuse!"

Page 6

Panel 1-Jack shrugged "Hay we all agreed on It. So,yeah."

Panel 2-"But.But." Demi tries to reply.

Panel 3- "Hay,I know you would ride me and Nora If we missed It so. Err,give or take."

Panel 4-Jack is walking down the stairs as Demi looks very upset. "Be happy It is only for a month."

Panel 5-Demi groans as as she grabs the bucket and sponge and heads onwards.

Panel 6- We see Jack, rubbing his neck. thinking about It.


page 7

Panel 1-Nora cuts into frame. "Done.Hay,don't tell me you.."

Panel 2- "I kind of feel bad for Demi." Jack says rubbing his arm.

Panel 3- "How?" Nora ask "I dont know. Just, a lot of work." Jack replies.

Panel 4- "We all agreed on It. Besides,you know she would jump for joy If one of us failed to pay the rent." Nora assuring Jack. By, being as remorseless as she could.

Panel 5- "anyways, you mind being a dear and buying some food for us to eat. We kind are low on normal food." Nora says to Jack.

Panel 6- Jack gets a grin on his face while going to the phone. "Getting pizza." Nora faceplams in the back. "Ofcrouse."

Panel 7- "At least, get some greens this time. I don't think my belly can handle another "Meaty overlord."" Nora says looking at her stomach.

Panel 8-"Ok, I'll only get..1 maybe 2 this time." Jack says putting the phone to his ear. (Does he have ears?)

Panel 9-"Or maybe 4 pizzas. Oh, and sodas." Jack says.

Panel 10- "Don't forget beardsticks." Nora says licking her lips. Kind of embarrassed of how gluttonous she was acting.


page 8-

Panel 1-we come to one of the pizza boxes (of 4) 2/3's empty. The beardsticks gone.

panel 2- Nora and Jack are watching Tv while eatting.

Panel 3- The door is knocked.

Panel 4- Jack looks at Nora and says "Told ya they forgot a soda.One sec."

Panel 5- Jack opens the door with a grin on his face. "Ok,let me.."

Panel 6-"Have it." Jack says backing away from the door. a Gun entering the frame.

Panel 7-Nora gets up as If getting ready to fight.

Panel 8- Nora gets hit by a boomergang.

panel 9-"now no need to hurt no one just tell me what ya want." Jack says nervous

Page 9

Panel 1- We get Nora and Jack's hands and arms bound while they are on the couch. Nora, looking anyoned and Jack confused.

Panel 2-We finally see our villian (She can be a tasmanian tiger or tasmanian devil) dressed as a outlaw. "This is a hold up huns. You best tell me where the safe is to the goods or do I have to ruff ya up."

Panel 3-"Are you mental?" Nora says. "Um, Safe?" Jack is not getting the act.

panel 4- "Don't act dumb. I know you all have a safe." She says aimming a gun at Nora's face.

Panel 5- Nora sniffs the gun.

Panel 6-"The guns not loaded." Nora smirked.

Panel 7- "Yes,huh It is."

Panel 8- "There is no odore from firing It. Let alone a smell of lead. I guess that explains the tossing stick."

Panel 9-The Crooke looks Distort.