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Two lovers, an alien rock and a blighted flower, spend their holiday in a cabin in the snow, away from prying eyes as they enjoy being small, and not so small, and cuddly.
Been a while since I posted something. I should make a habit of doing it more. And writing, that to.
For context; Lea and Nellie, in this story, are D&D character from a game I DM. Lea is mine, an NPC that's flower shaped and is normally a pile of walking roots with a typical flower for a head. He is a soft boy. Nellie is
Plinkie_Poi's character, a gemsona ala Steven Universe. He is a sassy, silly boy. Gaylu is a gem they adopted.
More Context: This is something I wrote for my girlfriend, Plinkie_Poi when we first became a thing. Wanted to let her know how she made me feel and how I want to make her feel. So I took some of out characters from the D&D game I run for her and other friends.
Even More Context: I feel a little weird posting such a short thing that involves unexplained character of mine, but I feel like it's okay to post this because, really, art and writing are about having fun. Even though it's not perfectly a 'you can read it and just get it' story, I'm still proud because I feel like the emotional weight behind it is something you can just get. Hopefully the context I've added here is enough to make it enjoyable.
Please enjoy.
Two lovers, an alien rock and a blighted flower, spend their holiday in a cabin in the snow, away from prying eyes as they enjoy being small, and not so small, and cuddly.
Been a while since I posted something. I should make a habit of doing it more. And writing, that to.
For context; Lea and Nellie, in this story, are D&D character from a game I DM. Lea is mine, an NPC that's flower shaped and is normally a pile of walking roots with a typical flower for a head. He is a soft boy. Nellie is
Plinkie_Poi's character, a gemsona ala Steven Universe. He is a sassy, silly boy. Gaylu is a gem they adopted.More Context: This is something I wrote for my girlfriend,
Plinkie_Poi when we first became a thing. Wanted to let her know how she made me feel and how I want to make her feel. So I took some of out characters from the D&D game I run for her and other friends.Even More Context: I feel a little weird posting such a short thing that involves unexplained character of mine, but I feel like it's okay to post this because, really, art and writing are about having fun. Even though it's not perfectly a 'you can read it and just get it' story, I'm still proud because I feel like the emotional weight behind it is something you can just get. Hopefully the context I've added here is enough to make it enjoyable.
Please enjoy.
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Unspecified / Any
Gender Multiple characters
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 55 kB
My hope was the context clues such as Lea being embarrassed about it, Lea calling Nellie a 'stick of Parmesan', and Nellie bumping into Lea's belly/diaper would be enough to get a general size across, as well as Lea being excited about being able to pick Nellie up. It's hard to write out exactly how big and fat he is without it sounding mechanical. I even described his height in a subtle way. I guess I'm confused, because I worked to subtly get across who's big and how big, in a general way. What more would you suggest?
That's not a story hint, that's a preference. As well, I said he had to turn sideways and suck it in to fit through the door frame. As well, I said his diaper could be used as a sleeping bag. I understand wanting more descriptors, but that's a personal desire. I find such excessive descriptions tedious, but sometimes I like them and I don't fault you for liking them. But I don't feel a need to keep bringing up the fact he's fat once it's been made clear he's fat.
With that said, I'm sorry the story isn't what you were hoping for. I have a few other 'fat' stories you may like.
With that said, I'm sorry the story isn't what you were hoping for. I have a few other 'fat' stories you may like.
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